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5/24/10

-Velcro Stones-

They broke emotional bones
by throwing verbal stones
and their words
will always haunt me.
Hitchhiker words
staying
like unwanted guests,
remain undeterred.
Sticking like velcro
these
tag-a-long adjectives
still taunting.

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4/10
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3 comments:

  1. Susannah5/25/10, 7:41 AM

    Brilliant, I love this one!

    "They broke emotional bones
    by throwing verbal stones"

    and. . .

    "Hitchhiker words"

    - just excellent! :-)

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  2. Singer5/25/10, 1:03 PM

    nice writing!

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  3. be not blind5/25/10, 10:26 PM

    Thanks Susannah and Singer! I feel pretty good about this one.

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