5/24/10

-Velcro Stones-

They broke emotional bones
by throwing verbal stones
and their words
will always haunt me.
Hitchhiker words
staying
like unwanted guests,
remain undeterred.
Sticking like velcro
these
tag-a-long adjectives
still taunting.

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4/10

3 comments:

Susannah said...

Brilliant, I love this one!

"They broke emotional bones
by throwing verbal stones"

and. . .

"Hitchhiker words"

- just excellent! :-)

Singer said...

nice writing!

be not blind said...

Thanks Susannah and Singer! I feel pretty good about this one.